Gedichtesammlung über Einzelhaltung

[Oli]

Habe vor ein paar Tagen ein Gedicht über Einzelhaltung verfasst und da dachte ich mir, dass wir vielleicht einmal alle SELBST GESCHRIEBENEN Gedichte zu diesem Thema in einem Thread sammeln könnten.

Freue mich auf rege Beteiligung!

Hier das Gedicht, habe auf Englisch geschrieben, die Grammatik ist teilweise leider nicht so doll, liesse sich aber sicher noch verbessern:

 I remember my brother and sister, mom and dad, I remember how much fun together we had. It was a happy time without any pain and sorrow and when the sun set, I was always looking forward to tomorrow.

But then one day, strange people came and took us apart, and even before I realized what was happening, they threw me into an iron cart.

My heart was broken and so was my soul, I`d never hear again momys lullaby song. My world became lonely, into deep silence I sunk and all they gave me was a piece of plastic junk.

Their own language was it they wished to hear from me, even tough I`d never understand what they are meant to be.

Time has become a dark hole, everything seems to go on so slow. But still they`d leave me alone with my pain, even tough I`ve started to cut down my little body and went insane.

Only the night and darkness became my freinds, until one fine day I lay dead on the ground, so this tragedy for another ends.

Übersetzung auf Deutsch folgt noch, bin momentan zu müde.